Score: 9

"Good christmas one"

submission: Turmoil Under The Tree

date: December 22, 2006

I thought this was pretty original, and the style is original due to the zack goodrichness.

The plot was original, and it had alot of unexpected twists.

The ending was really out of hand lol :P
I didnt know he would burst into some demon dude.

Score: 9

"Hooray"

submission: Mnemosyne Episode 1

date: December 15, 2006

Hey man, you did a great job there.
Man, I haven't seen a good flash like that in a long time here around in Newgrounds. It seems that 6 months were worth it.

The camera angles were very good, and each shot had a composition of suspense. The story looks very interesting, to me it seems almost post apocalyp, and that is one of my most favourite genres.

Clone wars is very inspiring, and your work looks almost like it. The pacing in the animation was great, good eye coordination. It's a pretty cool frame rate, what is it if I may ask?

The sound track choice was great, but I think you should use the sound more consistently. The last colossus fight theme (Where he enters the tower), it played for a while, then unexpectadely faded, and just as soon as I was getting used to it.

You have good potential there, and I can see you've worked blood and sweat on that. I'm very keen in looking forward to your works, keep up the good work man.

Score: 7

"Haha!"

submission: FB crosses the street

date: December 10, 2006

Hey man, that's quite amusing stuff. I have no idea or familiarity with the fat badger thing, but this animation did keep me up to the end.

I guess the style was unique, and the type of animation fitted it well. The sound matched the mood well, it would be good to have sound effects though. The fighting scene was short, but I guess it had gone along with it through.

I'd give the humor 8, and I'd point out some memorable stuff. There's the fat badger, whos walking is hillarious. Second, it was unexpected when they all turn buff, they beat the shit out of each other and then they turn back into their unfit forms. Third, the ending was just... Too random :P.

Anyways, yeah. I'd like to see you stretch out more of you're works.